Once upon a time there were a couple of mice who walked
together look for some food. Suddenly there was an eagle flew above of them.
“let us find some place to hide from the eagle” the husband said. So they ran
and saw around them to find a close place so the eagle won’t see them. But the
eagle still chased them because it was the time to eat for the eagle. When they
ran, the mice didn’t see that a few meters in front of them there was a small
river. The eagle flew faster because the eagle saw the river so he thought that
he could catch them. The mice ran quickly and suddenly one of them was fall
into the river. “quickly, hold my hands” the husband said. “I try. But the flow
is too swift” the wife answered. But fortunately there was a man who shot the
eagle. And the mice saved.
After that incident, the husband grumbled and told other
animal about what had happen to them. “I can change your appearance if you
want. So you don’t have to run again if there is an eagle” a dog said to him.
The husband smiled and nodded “please change me to be an eagle. I want to have
wings and fly like them”. So the dog changed the husband into an eagle. The
husband really happy and didn’t indulgent to fly but the wife didn’t know what
had happen to her husband. She just knew that her husband was disappear.
One day when the wife walked to look for food, she saw her
husband as an eagle flew above her. Because she didn’t know, so she ran and
didn’t remember that there was a river in front of her. “Be careful! There is a
river in front of you” the husband warned her. But it was too late because the
wife fell into the river again. And this time, her husband couldn’t save her.
Above of the river, the husband was lament because left his wife and because of
him, his wife died.
It was my first short story. i know there are many grammatical error but i'll try to decrease it in other story :)
